Go Back   Photography Mob > FINALLY FINISHED-PHOTOGRAPHY > PHOTOJOURNALISM and EDITORIAL
Wiki Register FAQ Members List Members World Map Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
  #1  
Old 09-18-2008, 11:25 AM
redneckrodney redneckrodney is offline
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 14
Thanks: 1
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Riverwalk

Recently spent the early morning at the Rvierwalk, a new development from the city here. Here are a few shots from there. Comments and crit appreciated and welcome.
Thanks
Attached Images
File Type: jpg henleystbridgeu.jpg (313.5 KB, 39 views)
File Type: jpg neylandstadiumu.jpg (415.9 KB, 40 views)
File Type: jpg riverwalkwaterfallu.jpg (757.6 KB, 39 views)
Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old 10-07-2008, 07:00 AM
Crash Crash is offline
Member
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 74
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
I like the lines in the second pic, love them actually.

The third picture is nice but it seems like you had an overcast sky wich makes it kind of grey and dull.

good stuff though, and keep updating.
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 10-15-2008, 10:16 PM
Grumbledook's Avatar
Grumbledook Grumbledook is offline
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Jan 2008
Posts: 337
Thanks: 2
Thanked 28 Times in 28 Posts
the first one is a bit dull and bland

the second is much more vibrant and a nice use of leading lines as crash said

the waterfall one I don't like the out of focus wall in the foreground, perhaps filling the frame with the waterfall in landscape may work better for this one
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 11-01-2008, 09:01 PM
redneckrodney redneckrodney is offline
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Mar 2008
Posts: 14
Thanks: 1
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Thanks for the c&c. I agree, i think the 2nd is the best overall. I have a few more from the same area on a different day I will post shortly. Thanks again.
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 11-02-2008, 11:49 AM
MacStian's Avatar
MacStian MacStian is offline
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Nov 2008
Posts: 27
Thanks: 1
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
2nd image has nice lines and interesting view of the area. You could try defining the backgr and forground more from eachother by pulling down the middlegr of the bay and treeline or one or the other, giving more depht..
Reply With Quote
Reply

  Photography Mob > FINALLY FINISHED-PHOTOGRAPHY > PHOTOJOURNALISM and EDITORIAL


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump


All times are GMT. The time now is 11:20 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.0 Beta 2
Copyright ©2000 - 2009, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.