Double Image

[Psychokitsune]

Hello, this will be my first post. Forgive me if I step on anyone's toes. I would just like some honest critique on how to make my artwork better. So go and do your worst. I just ask that if you don't like a aspect of my photos that you explain why. Thank you.



Two images of the same exposure cut up and put together.



Mirror images of the same exposure.

Both photos were hand developed and taken with 35mm black and white film.

[franticc]

First off, props for going with darkroom printing.

As for your actual work, I like the concept you have with your first one. I think that the choppy style works for that particular image, especially with the way that you have the subject in the photo.

The second one, I would rethink a bit. Mirroring is good, but I think that this could use a bit more cohesion. Matching tones in the foreground might help this a bit.

[Psychokitsune]

Originally Posted by lyjg1201

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How is a Ginkgo at all related to my art work?!