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Old 01-31-2008, 05:12 AM
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Hi,

I'm almost totally new to photography. Here are some shots I made yesterday. Would like to get some comments on them.

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Old 01-31-2008, 05:21 AM
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I don't really have too much to say... I'd crop out the wire on the top right corner of the first one. Also the third one looks so awesome... but I don't really like the lens flare ah, well.

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Old 01-31-2008, 05:32 AM
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Like someone said, you need to crop the first one, or be more careful when framing the shot.

Also watch out for your horizons, the second picture is wonky. Again this can be corrected in post with a rotate and crop.

Check out my composition thread in the foundation section for some tips. Keep practicing!
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Nice work in #3, good capture and composition. Just watch out for your overexposure when shooting in full sunlight.

#4 is a creative composition.

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Old 02-04-2008, 02:10 PM
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thx for the advice!

another shot:

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love the last one... you really captured her there : D
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Old 02-06-2008, 08:29 PM
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these two close ups are next:

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7 is a lil blurry.
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Old 02-25-2008, 08:30 PM
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ahhhhhahahaha i love #13. the kids fly is undone! haha i love it.
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