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Old 08-16-2008, 01:20 PM
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Hey, just joined up, never got critiques back at my other site, so hopefully you guys will help me out.





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Old 08-18-2008, 06:37 PM
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Wow, really amazing photos. The tones are gorgeous. Just some minor crits from me...

The first one has a really awesome mood, but I think the grain/noise is a bit overpowering. Would also suggest brightening the highlights a bit.

Second one is really amazing. Would you keep the same mood if you switched the middle and left panels? It's a bit hard to tell it's a triptych at first glance.

Last one is absolutely beautiful. Perhaps cropped a bit too tight at the top.

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I agree with PRose

love the tonal range in the second, what post processing did you do to them?
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Echoing the range in #2 is great. The desaturated feel works well to create the mood.
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Hey d-studios! New here myself, but IŽll give your images a shot of crits.

First of, nice landscapes! 1st gives me an impression of poster of some sort...? Because of the large neg. areas used with logo down the bottom. 2nd piece also seems like something for something, but what.? The story of it is hidden, but would be great to see a series of these! Your use of saturations and colors are inspiring in all three.

Are these images made for something in particular?
..if not, something resembling a story, to catch the eye in these images would make me stay longer with them. For ex. a car or a person in the street in your first image.
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