success! ;)

[shelbel]

im not even sure what im looking at...:P

[shelbel]

...im not sure i like this...too orange?

[Ment]

At first I'd say, it isn't sharp enough, a little sharpness would add much to the photo.
Secondly I think it's a little too much orange, I should go for a little less and so keeping the atmosphere which the orange tones create.

[shelbel]

yea, sharpness is def. an issue...'seems to be one with all my pictures...i suppose i should play around with photoshop some, bc i have no way on my lil cheapie camera to adjust this problem.

[carolupus]

I don't think you can make that picture much sharper with photoshop... you can make it less orange though.
what kind of camera are you using?

[shelbel]

its just a cheapie little polaroid digital ....*sob :P

[shelbel]

yay, i think i finally made these the right size...sorry for repost...

[John.D]

Sizes are fine.

I like the last the most, the first two are quite blurry. Nice texture on the background, nice composition too!

[shelbel]

ty...im just playing around, 'not a very good camera... there is something about the last one i like, im not sure what it is...

[shelbel]

....of my son and i....any and all feedback is welcome; i can handle critizism.

[klips]

You have asked for feedback, and as such I shall deliver.

These need a lot of work. They are:
- very blurry (with one exception, the second one of your son)
- myspace shots rather than artistic compositions

What to do:
- find out if the focus/blur is a camera or user error and fix accordingly
- try using more natural light, especially in the early morning or late evening which will mean that you can shoot faster and hopefully reduce blurring. It will also make the light a more natural colour than shooting inside.
- read up on composition and exposure

[shelbel]

2 new ones...'not sure how i feel about them...the first one is my first attempt at photoshop...i personally think that by making the background black, i made the pic worse.....thoughts?

[klips]

I hate to be the troll, but this kind of work should be in the scrapbooks section. The forum says "FINALLY FINISHED-PHOTOGRAPHY
... Images posted in this forum should be finalized and well presented" and these are not really either. They still have the issues with blur and poor colouring, you need to change the white balance and use a tripod/table/something.

[shelbel]

i understand where youre coming from, but i beg to differ. if its my work, and i believe it is finalized,and done with it, then to me thats finally finished.

[Gentile]

:/...