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Old 03-25-2008, 01:38 AM
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Old 03-25-2008, 01:41 AM
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Old 03-25-2008, 02:19 AM
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Pretty nice photo, I like the tones. I would play around with some tighter cropping to help focus the viewer's attention.

P.S.: Try not to post your photos too large. It's hard to view the photo in it's entirety if you have to scroll a lot.
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i agree, i like the natural sepia tones but most of the left hand side with the lens flare at the top to the out of focus pods aren't needed and distract from the whole picture. to me the background pods even call the sharpness of the foreground pods into question, but a crop just to the right of the stick holding the rear pods (leaving only two of those pods in the picture) might bring the main pod into the focal point.
but those foreground pods have great shape and texture... nice shot...
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hey piotr. are you from poland?
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Old 03-27-2008, 05:29 AM
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yes I am From Poland
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Old 03-27-2008, 05:31 AM
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Okay i took this picture of my turtle let me know what you guys think.!!
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whee, you also have a turtle!! what a cutie! I like the photo. a little grainy though.
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I like the turtle, too bad his flippers aren't sharp. I think the whole photo could use a little more contrast, it's rather greyish now without much white or black.
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Old 03-27-2008, 06:29 PM
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I actually have two turtles the one in the picture is the young one the older one is bigger in size but still just as cute. thanks guys
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Old 03-27-2008, 06:36 PM
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my friends boyfriend's name is piotr. he moved to here(usa) from poland.
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What do you guys think of this one?
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i like that one, i think a tighter crop would help it out.
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Thank you, I think your right. I tried it and it looks pretty good.
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