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Old 03-20-2008, 01:39 PM
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D70s photos

I just got a camera this year (D70s)

so im still in basic learning modus. any critique you give would be verry nice (:
if anyone desides to use any of these as reffs it would be cool if you tell me, fun to see stuff getting used.

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i'm in love for n.4
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Pretty nice compositions, especially in #10.

Keep working on your contrast so the people can "pop" more.
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Pretty nice compositions, especially in #10.
Keep working on your contrast so the people can "pop" more.
Colour contrasts(cold warm, dark light) or do you mean like sharpness/shape contrasts?
or maybe just separating them from the background all together?
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Colour contrasts(cold warm, dark light) or do you mean like sharpness/shape contrasts?
or maybe just separating them from the background all together?
Your color contrast is alright. I'm speaking more in terms of tonal values. You should have a good range of dark shadows to highlights, right now some of them look a bit "flat" to me.
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Your color contrast is alright. I'm speaking more in terms of tonal values. You should have a good range of dark shadows to highlights, right now some of them look a bit "flat" to me.

noted down. i will try to find ways to do that in future! really helps when people point spesific things out like that, opens my eyes more.
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