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Old 03-01-2008, 04:31 AM
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35mm Virginia

Well I moved to Virginia recently and have been playing around with this Nikon F1 I also got recently.

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Old 03-01-2008, 06:58 AM
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I really like the first one but I think there might be just a bit too much sky at the top.
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Old 03-01-2008, 01:24 PM
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I like the first and the third one!
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Old 03-01-2008, 08:44 PM
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I really like the first one but I think there might be just a bit too much sky at the top.
Yeah, it looks ok on its own, but now that I see it here in a thread,
I agree with you. The pic is like all sky!
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I really like the first one too. Just a simple crop of a 1/3 of the sky and it would be better like Gentile said. Wouldn't hurt to crop off the rest of the cut off cow on the left side as well.

I like the one with the lonely cow as well. Would be beneficial to play around with the cropping more though.
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Old 03-03-2008, 03:48 AM
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thanks!
wow no one likes my trailer, that was my fav, haha.

yeah i didn't work these over very much in ps.
I think i'll give the 1st one another once over and repost.
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Old 03-03-2008, 07:52 AM
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the first one is really nice. and the negative space isn't too bad, if this was going in a magazine or something, the editors would love to put text in that space. The cow at the edge is a little strange though. If you're not against cropping, that might be a good idea, or cloning it out, whatever works. But cropping's probably easier
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Old 03-06-2008, 01:31 AM
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Update

Ok so I took your advice into account and made some changes to the first one.

I agree, much better with that side cow removed!
Gotta wonder why I thought that was acceptable. Well at least I'm learning!

Did some other slight tweaks too.

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this is a nice edit, i really like the way the tree line draws you in from the right and then fades out so you focus on the cows.
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love the last one with the cows. you should try it out in B&W...
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It's just a personal point of view but, i think it's a little too luminous, so there is a lack of surrounding. The first one in B&W, maybe ?

But un great potential

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