Singapore Streets

[Yoricko]

Well, my first thread. Studying diploma in animation right now, though I'm more interested in capturing life with the camera.

Cheers

[EvrEst]

Welcome to Photography Mob!

I like the second one best but I would change your compostion to have the bench on one side more than the other and maybe alittle bit closer in.

The second to last one is pretty good to but again would move alittle bit closer and move three or four steps at a front angle to the right. that will set your compostion of the children away from the rest of the people and add to the focal interest.

I look forward to seeing more! I will tell you like the rest of the newer photographers, start a scrapbook as well and post all of your work there so we can see an overall progression and maturity in your work!

[Yoricko]

Originally Posted by EvrEst

Welcome to Photography Mob!

I like the second one best but I would change your compostion to have the bench on one side more than the other and maybe alittle bit closer in.

The second to last one is pretty good to but again would move alittle bit closer and move three or four steps at a front angle to the right. that will set your compostion of the children away from the rest of the people and add to the focal interest.

I look forward to seeing more! I will tell you like the rest of the newer photographers, start a scrapbook as well and post all of your work there so we can see an overall progression and maturity in your work!

Aite, thanks for the composition tips.

[EvrEst]

LOL I love that first one! Watch the black at the top.

The second one is good too I would cut the pick off at the corner to the left and right on the left edge of the trash cans because the kid in the background adds too much depth and makes it busy.

Last one is cool I like the angle off the corner of the bus!