A newbie in the hood..

[Danzap]

Hey all!

I thought i should show some of my pictures i have taken.
Feel that there are lots of good photographers here to give critics so i can become better.

[purplerose]

Love the DOF in the first one. The text feels a bit intrusive though, perhaps another font and size if you really want to keep it?

The second one would be stronger without the blue. Just work on improving the contrast in it and it will have better impact.

[AlexSmith]

Same here, I love the first one its kinda Gothic.
Good thing about black and white is that,
it add a bit drama to the image.
And aside from that it seems that black and white
images expresses an intense emotions.
By the way the last image I suggest that the best title for that,
is The Journey, as we grow old we start to vanish our lives just like
the foot prints in the sand once the prints are near to the sea
it start to faded and disappear.
Th journey of the foot prints in the sand was ended.



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[sonalis]

first one nice............ Good thing about black and white is that DOF