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Old 12-29-2008, 02:33 PM
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New here!

Hi, new in photography and need some help in each individual photos. C&C pls.Thanks
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Old 12-29-2008, 02:40 PM
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Some of the photos~
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Old 12-29-2008, 05:32 PM
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hey some nice photos there, hard to pick them out without numbering them

some barrel distortion on the ladder and pipes against the wall

I like the red building with the shutters the best and for some reason the 44 on the green as well

some of them havn't come off as well though, the lamp post in being in the middle of the frame isn't very interesting composition wise for example
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Old 12-30-2008, 07:24 AM
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Hey thanks Grumbledook for your comments! I was new here so still not sure how to label my photos and numbering them in order. Anyway, thanx for the comments.
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Nice textural look in a lot of them. Very abstract in a way. I think some of them could be tweaked by fiddling with the white balance.
It's a matter of taste, but I don't like those cold spots that occur when the white balance is "almost right".
Maybe keep an eye on that (for example, this is appearing in the post box image).

In the same image, the focus is totally off and it's not nice to look at it.
The first image in this thread is also overexposed, which shows in the unpleasant white spots on the floor, the chair and the bar wall.
And again, the content says "summer", but the white balance says "autumn".
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Jabo has some good points there.

Look at all thus nice Reds!
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