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Old 02-06-2008, 11:00 AM
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My firsts 2 digital b/w photos

Hi all,
i'm usually to do a sort of photomanipulations with photoshop, with digital painting and collages too.

Some days ago i wondered how to improve my skills, learning photography and black&white.
I hope to receive some crits by professional photographs that read this great forum!

Thank you!
(I'm sorry for my english)
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Old 02-06-2008, 11:10 AM
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very cool b&w...
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Old 02-06-2008, 11:12 AM
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Old 02-06-2008, 11:13 AM
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Not yet for now Thank you!

Waiting some crits
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Old 02-06-2008, 11:25 AM
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beautiful
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Old 02-06-2008, 12:44 PM
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Not much to criticize.. Well in the last photo the whites are overexposed. I'd like to see some details on those areas. I think the dark end is pretty okay.
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Nice photos. I particularly like the first one. You have some great tones.

Critique wise, I would say to vary your compositions and angles more. It's fine to have some things centered, but everything doesn't have to be centered. Try to think if the subject you're shooting would look more dynamic from a different angle.
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nice work,
continua a scattare, specialmente a Venezia dove č la cittā stessa a chiederti d'essere fotografata.
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i love your work. My favorite is the bauta.
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