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Old 10-17-2008, 12:02 AM
thomas pradeilles thomas pradeilles is offline
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Hi all, i'm new here so this my little work, black and white photography recolorised. Can you gimme your opinion please. (result is a bit pixelised due to the size, but in real print here is none ^^, print size approximatly 50 x 70 cm

You can see more works in my gallery.

Thanks a lot.
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Old 10-24-2008, 01:25 PM
haumovie haumovie is offline
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I like your stuff. You certainly have a style there.

What do you mean with "recolorized"?

The first shot has great light and good movement from left to right. The shift from grey to black on the girls trousers bothers me a little bit, as does the writing on there.

I think the second shot could benefit from a bit more work. The crop is a little too tight for my liking. Have you tried expanding the vignetting to hide the feet entirely?

Tones in the last shot are great, as is the pose of the standing lad. I think his face speaks a lot and would like just a smidgen more light on it, but I'm nitpicking - it's a great shot.

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