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otsopsanig
01-31-2008, 03:04 PM
Hey all... I'm not a particularly experienced photographer, but I've got a digital photography class and figured, "hey, why not get some critiques?"

So... All of my stuff is digital, most taken with a Fujifilm Finepix. Some are edited in photoshop. I'll tell you which, don't worry!

Here are some photos from class, all edited in photoshop.

Critiques are seriously more than welcome... Do not asspat unless you really feel compelled to, my friends... :)

As for the last two, I'm not sure which version I like better... Any suggestions?

otsopsanig
01-31-2008, 03:05 PM
Whoa, I just noticed... I really need to vary my stupid composition! Argh, all the subjects are on the right!

purplerose
01-31-2008, 06:30 PM
Along with your compositions, I think you need to work on your focusing as well. The first image is really cool and nice, just too blurry.

I pulled your skull into PS for some B/W conversion. It's a nice photo, the only thing that's distracting is the ceiling light.

Keep shooting! :)