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redneckrodney
09-18-2008, 11:25 AM
Recently spent the early morning at the Rvierwalk, a new development from the city here. Here are a few shots from there. Comments and crit appreciated and welcome.
Thanks
Crash
10-07-2008, 07:00 AM
I like the lines in the second pic, love them actually.
The third picture is nice but it seems like you had an overcast sky wich makes it kind of grey and dull.
good stuff though, and keep updating.
Grumbledook
10-15-2008, 10:16 PM
the first one is a bit dull and bland
the second is much more vibrant and a nice use of leading lines as crash said
the waterfall one I don't like the out of focus wall in the foreground, perhaps filling the frame with the waterfall in landscape may work better for this one
redneckrodney
11-01-2008, 09:01 PM
Thanks for the c&c. I agree, i think the 2nd is the best overall. I have a few more from the same area on a different day I will post shortly. Thanks again.
MacStian
11-02-2008, 11:49 AM
2nd image has nice lines and interesting view of the area. You could try defining the backgr and forground more from eachother by pulling down the middlegr of the bay and treeline or one or the other, giving more depht..
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