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helldoggolem
09-07-2008, 07:10 PM
Hello, i'm fresh registred Member, but i view this wounderful board so long and finally i registerd myself :D


I made some Pictures in my backyard garden, the botanical garden of the university of Bochum.

1.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/Flower1.jpg

2.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/flower2.jpg

3.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/flower5.jpg

4.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/flower6.jpg

6.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/flower7.jpg

7.


http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/flower3.jpg

8.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/flower4.jpg

9.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/insect1.jpg

10.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/insect2.jpg

purplerose
09-09-2008, 10:48 PM
Welcome to the phorum! :)

6 & 10 are really nice, but I think you should work more on getting your macros to be sharper.

Lucky to have a botanical garden so close to you. Keep posting. :)

helldoggolem
09-13-2008, 05:53 PM
After i had a little more freetime finally, i followed rose advise ( thanks ) and went out to work on my scope skill

11.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/flower8.jpg

12.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/flower16.jpg

13.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/flower15.jpg

14.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/flower14.jpg

15.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/flower13.jpg

16.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/flower12.jpg

17.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/flower9.jpg

18.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/flower11.jpg

19.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s245/helldoggolem/Photos/flower10.jpg

purplerose
09-14-2008, 10:55 PM
#12, 14, 16-18 look better in sharpness. they have nice compositions as well. I think you may be cropping too much for 11, 13 and 15 though. Areas that are sharp tend to get fuzzy when you zoom in on them.