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reprobus
01-31-2008, 05:12 AM
Hi,
I'm almost totally new to photography. Here are some shots I made yesterday. Would like to get some comments on them.
1.
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj160/reprobus_ph/tomb-800.jpg?t=1201756499
2.
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj160/reprobus_ph/tetok-800.jpg?t=1201756430
3.
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj160/reprobus_ph/lemegy-800.jpg?t=1201756352
4.
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj160/reprobus_ph/nyomok-800.jpg?t=1201756542
someone
01-31-2008, 05:21 AM
I don't really have too much to say... I'd crop out the wire on the top right corner of the first one. Also the third one looks so awesome... but I don't really like the lens flare :( ah, well.
I'll let the professionals take over now ;)
Grumbledook
01-31-2008, 05:32 AM
Like someone said, you need to crop the first one, or be more careful when framing the shot.
Also watch out for your horizons, the second picture is wonky. Again this can be corrected in post with a rotate and crop.
Check out my composition thread in the foundation section for some tips. Keep practicing!
purplerose
01-31-2008, 10:19 AM
Nice work in #3, good capture and composition. Just watch out for your overexposure when shooting in full sunlight.
#4 is a creative composition.
Keep shooting! :)
reprobus
02-04-2008, 02:10 PM
thx for the advice!
another shot:
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj160/reprobus_ph/astray800.jpg?t=1202133989
coldrum
02-06-2008, 04:00 AM
love the last one... you really captured her there : D
reprobus
02-06-2008, 08:29 PM
these two close ups are next:
6
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj160/reprobus_ph/2007_05110016.jpg?t=1202329515
7
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj160/reprobus_ph/2007_05110071.jpg?t=1202329511
ukanfoff
02-06-2008, 08:50 PM
7 is a lil blurry.
reprobus
02-15-2008, 04:31 PM
Update:
8
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj160/reprobus_ph/sas.jpg
9
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj160/reprobus_ph/sas2.jpg
10
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj160/reprobus_ph/sing.jpg
11
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj160/reprobus_ph/sing2.jpg
12
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj160/reprobus_ph/guit.jpg
13
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj160/reprobus_ph/chil.jpg
Mayday
02-25-2008, 08:30 PM
ahhhhhahahaha i love #13. the kids fly is undone! haha i love it.
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