Stone's Scrapbook!

[Stoneface]

Just started photography a week ago. Tell me your thoughts!


http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs25/i/2008/151/4/7/The_Fan_by_Stoneface_GFX.png
http://stoneface-gfx.deviantart.com/art/The-Fan-87213177

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs28/i/2008/151/2/2/Tube_by_Stoneface_GFX.png
http://stoneface-gfx.deviantart.com/art/Tube-87229608

http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs28/i/2008/152/3/3/Book_by_Stoneface_GFX.png
http://stoneface-gfx.deviantart.com/art/Book-87282064

http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs28/i/2008/153/c/7/Burning_Chair_by_Stoneface_GFX.png
http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs28/i/2008/153/c/7/Burning_Chair_by_Stoneface_GFX.png
Series of this destroyed house. I have a couple more yet to post and edit. A lovely place nonetheless.

All taken with Canon EOS20D.

[stine]

hey there! looks like a lovely place, indeed!
your photos show a good sense of light and shadow, all of them have a very strong mood to them. unfortunately they are a bit too big for my monitor to see them as a whole, which is a pity. one thing i've noticed: i would crop the first photo a bit - that bright line of the window on the upper right is a bit distracting. it takes away the focus from the center.
the second one has a nice use of depht of field, but it's a bit too "cluttered" for my taste.
i personally like the third one most (the one with the book)it has the strongest composition, i think.
maybe toning down the blown out highlights a tiny tad on the book (and maybe the window) in photoshop would improve it even a bit more.

good work, especially for one week of experience.
see you around!

stine

[Stoneface]

Thanks for the feedback Stine! I'll take your crtique into action momentarily.

[Trent0090]

I really liked the picture of the book. I liked how you lined up the lighting in that one.