More Sun!!!..

[Athma]

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Hello, everyone!
I just started using digital camera and I think it would be great to get feedback from more expierenced photographers. So I decided to start a thread here. Leave your crits and comments guys! Thank you!:):):)

[Athma]

Some flame....

[Athma]

Some water...

[purplerose]

You have some nice colors in your photos, just need to work on your compositions some more.

http://www.photographytips.com/page.cfm/6 Browse the rest of the site as well. :)

Keep shooting! :)

[Athma]

these are old-old photoes...)

[Athma]

Moscow.red square.temple.

[Athma]

Some water...)

[Athma]

Some water...))

[Athma]

Some water...)))

[Nike]

Hi Athma

Your pictures are beautiful in their colors and you show interesting subjects, too. My favourite is the 2d of the "some water" series. And that moscow red temple paintings are awesome - great to see some photos of them!!!

As purplerose said, work on your compositions - most of your compositions are central and very similar.

Cheers, and keep shooting! :)

[Athma]

1 http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/vesnaF.jpg

2 http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/cvetikiF.jpg

3 http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/listyaF.jpg

[Nike]

Nice ones!

Very fresh colors and nice compositions and good focus. I think the first two might benefit from a bit more contrast?

[thorshammer]

I really like what I am seeing here. The only problem is that the majority of your suject matter is centered...compossionally you might try off setting the subject.

Otherwise these are some great shots. keep up the amazing work!

[Athma]

Nike - Thank you! I`ll be more attentive while editing my shots:)

throshammer - Thank you very much for a nice words and for advise! I work on my compositions already:)

The Sun and...

1.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/zakatF.jpg 2.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/zakat1F.jpg

3.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/paukF.jpg

[Athma]

...in May)

1.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/babochka__F.jpg

2.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/zheltyjF.jpg

[purplerose]

I like the spider silhouette. :)

[Frutsel]

The spider shot is very cool!

[daedicurus]

nice gradient in the sky behind the spider and the sunsets

[Athma]

purplerose, Frutsel, daedicurus - thank you!=))

..These are the first shots of my town, Kaliningrad. It's located at the very west of Russia. My town is more beautiful, than it seems on photos:-) I just start to learn.

1.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/IMGP6678.jpg

2.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/IMGP6783.jpg

3.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/IMGP7445.jpg

..I love narrow streets and old houses))
4.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/IMGP6605.jpg

[Athma]

5. http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/domF.jpg 6. http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/luzhaF.jpg

7. http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/zelenF.jpg

8. http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/odessa-moyaF.jpg

9. http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/sarajchikF.jpg

[Athma]

1.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/podsolnuhiF.jpg

2.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/roza1F.jpg

3.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/_rozaF.jpg
..This is real color of rose, no effects were used=)

[Iliada]

Wonderful colours in the last three! Makes me smile =)

(And I can see you tried working on the composition, good job)

[purplerose]

Nice work in #7. Would try playing around with cropping to see what you get. :)

[Nike]

Wow, some great new stuff - I really love the spider and the last two photos of the rose.

In the sunflower, I think there could be more contrast in the lighter areas - the light greens and yellows. It might also be interesting to try such a shot with different apertures - maybe a less closed aperture would give it a tad bit more depth. Nice shot, though :)

Looking forwads to seeing more!

[Athma]

Iliada - Thank you! Glad you like it:)
purplerose - Thank you! About cropping - I playing with it from time to time and sure I will, it helps to get interesting results.
Nike - Thanks for encouragement and for the tips! I`m learning to edit photos step by step. You`re right about aperture - I`ll use your advise in my next shots. Thank you for such useful comment.

1.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/yablonyaF.jpg


2.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/oduvanchikF.jpg


3.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/koraF.jpg


4.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/zakatFF.jpg

[daedicurus]

great sunset, i would try darkening the blues a little bit in the top right corner or applying a slight gamma vignette and i love the colours in the tree sap shot

[purplerose]

#2 is really nice and sharp! :)

I like the sunset as well. Agree with daedicarus about darkening some tones to help with contrast.

[Athma]

daedicurus & purplerose - Thank you very much! Useful comments are always welcome! I`m still learning to edit photos in photoshop...)))


1. http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/IMGP2502.jpg


2. http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/_nebolyuk.jpg


3. http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/lyuk.jpg


4. http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/kolodec.jpg


5. http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/t/athma/odin-iz.jpg

[Ulver]

Nice shots! I like composition in the last ones. You`re getting better and better, keep going!

[purplerose]

Yepp, nice update. :) #4 is my fave. :)

[Athma]

purplerose - Thank you=)


1.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/b/a/barefooted_maya/korovka1.jpg



2.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/b/a/barefooted_maya/korovka-i-krapiva.jpg


3.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/b/a/barefooted_maya/ulitka.jpg


3.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/b/a/barefooted_maya/podnebesnyj.jpg


4.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/b/a/barefooted_maya/zaperto.jpg


5.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/b/a/barefooted_maya/devochka-i-osen.jpg


6.http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/b/a/barefooted_maya/dite-nachalo.jpg

[Athma]

it's me=)

http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/b/a/barefooted_maya/ya_11.jpg

[purplerose]

I really like the ones with the ladybug and the snail. Would play around more with the cropping though.

[ukanfoff]

i like ur style, very light n spacious.
just watch out blowing out ur highlights though.