Prisoner Photoshoot/ Critiques please

[Kemal]

Hello, I took these in and around an abandoned prison. I used my K10D, kit lens and fa 50 mm. The rest of the gallery is here: http://www.kemal.ca/mine/thumbnails.php?album=45 if you'd like to rate or comment. Tell me what you think.

http://www.kemal.ca/mine/albums/Digital/K10D/pris1/-5706.jpg

http://www.kemal.ca/mine/albums/Digital/K10D/pris1/-5715.jpg

http://www.kemal.ca/mine/albums/Digital/K10D/pris1/-5725.jpg

http://www.kemal.ca/mine/albums/Digital/K10D/pris1/-5874.jpg

http://www.kemal.ca/mine/albums/Digital/K10D/pris1/-5775.jpg

[purplerose]

Nice ones. Really like the 1st and 3rd one. The first one has a nice angle and the 3rd one seems to tell a story. It also has nice tones.

[Micaiah Nelson]

I like the second and the fourth. Her eyes are gorgeous!

[carolupus]

that is so creepy, she looks exactly like my mother when she was younger...

I like the pictures though, especially the last one.

[JonS]

#3 is the best of these.

For the rest, what is the story being told here? I don't see it.

I see technically good landscape images (with excellent color and richness) that happen to have a person in them.

What is the person doing in them? Why is she there? She doesn't really appear to *want* to be there or to communicate anything to the viewer. She's just...There.

What's the story?

Tell the story in your images.