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I will start off with a gigantic upload. criti as much as possible, but i would like to know how to get better not only what im doing wrong : P
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http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs26/i/2008/076/b/9/photo__16_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs26/i/2008/076/6/9/photo__21_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs27/i/2008/076/e/a/photo__26_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs29/i/2008/076/e/4/photo__23_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs28/i/2008/076/7/c/photo__22_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs28/i/2008/076/a/3/photo__17_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs30/i/2008/045/9/2/Photo__Myr_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs29/i/2008/062/a/c/Beckett_and_the_beast_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs14/i/2007/011/a/d/Lomo_1_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs22/i/2008/001/8/b/booooar_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs24/i/2008/022/a/9/photo__Car_Eclipse_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs26/f/2008/076/0/5/photo__13_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/64450_1199236818.jpg
purplerose
03-24-2008, 03:30 AM
Nice tones in #2.
#10 is friggin' creepy... O_O
keep playing around with your compositions and DOF like you have here, you're doing great. :)
Thank you again purplerose.
playing around
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http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs28/i/2008/084/4/7/photo__36_by_JOFX.jpg
carolupus
03-24-2008, 10:42 PM
I really like no 8 - it has a very melancholic feeling to it. I'd cut the log in the left corner though.
carolupus :
Thanks, i think i should have moved the hole view so the log wasent trying to make aborderthingy with the photoframe. cuting it would make an odd size to the photo and alsp putting to many elements in one confined space. guess the best thing to do would be to fiks it up in PS.
Thanks for the comment! i dint even see the log untill you pointed it out (: a really helpful comment
pernille
03-25-2008, 12:01 PM
I like Isak the purple man.
Also I really like the light in number 14 and thefact that Julius isn't really there
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http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs28/i/2008/086/6/b/photo__38_by_JOFX.jpg
walking around Oslo... cold
purplerose
03-26-2008, 07:32 PM
I really like the tones and exposure in that one. :)
Did you try playing around with cropping on it?
Thanks!
no, because the corner of the building is in a nice position (golden rule or whatever) and the dark at the bottom is balancing everything, holding everything down.
What would you have cropped on it?
I used the 3D glasses that are awesome. you know, the red and blue ones.
-modified the red side so that i could put it on the lens.
so no manips fosho'
feedback?
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http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs26/i/2008/090/1/5/photo__39_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs25/i/2008/090/3/c/photo__40_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs28/i/2008/090/2/7/photo__41_by_JOFX.jpg
pernille
03-31-2008, 09:43 AM
ha. i did that once, but i didnt to anything to the glasses i just held them in front of the lens. twas fun and scary.
i like these. i like beckett.
darkchild
03-31-2008, 10:20 AM
#11 on your first post is a very beautiful capture!
I agree, #11 is really cool. it's got a kind of abstract, apocalyptic feeling to it :D
rhajastan
04-02-2008, 12:53 PM
I agree with the last two posts (not including yours), no. 11 is great, i love the different colours in the sky. also like no. 13 just coz of the warm tone.
Thanks Rhajastan! nice feedback (:
Adding my pictures from the portrait thread.
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http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/13209_1199235920.jpg
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http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/15727_1199719647.jpg
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http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/43707_1199376380.jpg
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http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/assasasah1.jpg
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http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/f6.jpg
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http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/farrokh_to_the_nill_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/mayt.jpg
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http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/Seb.jpg
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http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/sri.jpg
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http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs29/i/2008/096/b/f/photo__43_by_JOFX.jpg
strange perspective and comp' but i like it anyway
Gentile
04-05-2008, 03:41 PM
I really like the last one. It's so full of color and life.
Thank you Gentile_
actually it is the grayest day i have even been out in a long time. Photoshop does miracles:P
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http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs26/i/2008/096/c/7/Andre_by_JOFX.jpg
Borrowing a lens from a friend that he got for 4kr (less than one dollar)
Your portraits have a very warm, natural feel, I really like that :) In some of them, the noise is a bit strong (18, 19, 27 for example). In the last one, too, but here, for some reason, I think it adds to the photo, together with the soft focus, mood and composition - I like this one.
I've got to get my hands on 3d glasses, too, that looks like a lot of fun :)
Long time. havent used the camera much lately
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http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs28/i/2008/142/a/8/Photo__Blind_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs30/i/2008/132/0/2/Photo__russ_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs30/i/2008/127/3/d/paien_by_JOFX.jpg
purplerose
05-23-2008, 11:04 AM
There's something about #33 that I really like. :) Maybe make the shadows a bit darker to push the mood more?
There's something about #33 that I really like. :) Maybe make the shadows a bit darker to push the mood more?
i tried doing that but it takes away the nessesery details in the shadows. it would become to simple of a picture: the shadows would just become big blobs of black... at least thats how it would look on my screen
Its now summer
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http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs29/i/2008/153/2/c/Photo__Summer_days_8_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs25/i/2008/153/8/2/Photo__Summer_days_7_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs25/i/2008/153/0/5/Photo__Summer_days_6_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs27/i/2008/153/8/3/Photo__Summer_days_5_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs26/i/2008/153/8/c/Photo__Summer_days_3_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs26/i/2008/153/a/b/Photo__Summer_days_2_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs26/i/2008/153/e/4/Photo__Summer_days_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs25/i/2008/154/4/c/Photo__Tricky_2_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs29/i/2008/154/c/e/Photo__Tricky_1_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs27/i/2008/170/4/e/Pulchritude_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs30/i/2008/164/c/f/Photo__hipshot_by_JOFX.jpg
purplerose
06-20-2008, 06:06 AM
Nice work in #38. :) Maybe try to work on the contrast more?
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http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs31/i/2008/187/a/3/Photo__Falling_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs31/i/2008/187/7/c/Photo__He_donted_knowded_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs32/i/2008/187/a/f/Photo__RocketDanielRocket_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs32/i/2008/232/f/e/Photo__Cliffs_Of_Moher_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs32/i/2008/232/d/a/Photo__Creep_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc37.deviantart.com/fs37/i/2008/258/4/7/Photo__Burgr_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://photos-d.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-snc1/v319/140/17/1281793880/n1281793880_101819_1253.jpg
Crash
09-23-2008, 10:01 AM
Some really great pics in this thread.
I really love #6
Drunq pictures :P
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http://fc51.deviantart.com/fs37/i/2008/265/1/5/Photo__W8ing_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs36/i/2008/265/8/8/Photo__wrock_n_wroll_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc94.deviantart.com/fs37/i/2008/265/3/9/Photo__X_Edge_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc21.deviantart.com/fs37/f/2008/265/8/7/Photo__You_Youth_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc54.deviantart.com/fs35/i/2008/299/3/4/Photo__Copenhagen_by_JOFX.jpg
Was in Copenhagen and found this bar. very cool place
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http://fc37.deviantart.com/fs39/i/2008/317/4/9/Learning1_by_JOFX.jpg
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Self portrait, trying out black and white.
Critique?
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http://fc99.deviantart.com/fs39/i/2008/332/e/e/Photo__Jlz_by_JOFX.jpg
Some pictures taken whilst skateboarding on ice (not a good idea btw:P) The only light source was a street lam that flickered quickly instead of showing constant stream of light.
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http://fc42.deviantart.com/fs38/i/2008/357/f/f/Mars_Geta_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc58.deviantart.com/fs39/i/2008/357/5/5/Venus_Ordelia_by_JOFX.jpg
Concert photos
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http://fc66.deviantart.com/fs38/i/2008/341/3/c/Photo__Extence_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc65.deviantart.com/fs39/i/2008/341/4/1/Photo__Mats_And_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc74.deviantart.com/fs38/i/2008/335/0/b/Photo__Tira_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc80.deviantart.com/fs39/i/2008/335/d/6/Photo__Exhale_Existence_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc67.deviantart.com/fs38/i/2008/321/d/c/Photo__Isak_by_JOFX.jpg
http://fc45.deviantart.com/fs39/i/2008/335/2/4/Photo__loga_by_JOFX.jpg
Hey,
you have some really nice action photos! I also like 42 and 45 a lot. With most of your indoor photos it's a pity there's so much noise it sometimes "hurts". 64 for instance would be a really strong shot, I think, since the movement unsharpness is perfectly working for me in this context. But that's a camera issue, I guess.
I also like the ice-skateboarding experiments. Interesting shapes!
Keep posting! :)
VenomVindicta
01-23-2009, 05:55 PM
Some of these are really great.
I especially like #38.
But i think in #68 i'd have cropped out the background, imho it subtracts fro the picture instead of adding. It's a good idea though, must've taken ages to get them in that position during a show. XD
keep posting :)
DStraX
02-01-2009, 01:53 PM
wickedsick! liker veldig godt 58, 61 og 62 :)
Nike- know if some cameras can proses less light? like a F5 on one camera would show the same amount of light as an F3.7 on another? (if you just think about light that is and forget about DOF and so on)
VenomVindicta- Thanks, yeah guess the vocalist is a bit awkward looking :D
DStraX- thanks thakk takk
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DOF is a bitt off on this one but i still like it
http://fc87.deviantart.com/fs41/i/2009/041/b/8/Photo__regine_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc73.deviantart.com/fs41/i/2009/041/c/e/Sandra_by_JOFX.jpg
some older pictures, i can really see there is to much ISO compared to the last two ones i posted. try my best to keep it down from now on
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http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v375/140/17/1281793880/n1281793880_181631_2933.jpg
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http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v375/140/17/1281793880/n1281793880_181629_2086.jpg
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http://photos-a.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v336/140/17/1281793880/n1281793880_120568_7480.jpg
74
its like Moscow-cold here
http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs41/i/2009/043/2/d/minus_ten_by_JOFX.jpg
purplerose
02-14-2009, 07:01 AM
Nice feel to that last one. A bit noisy around the mouth & nose though.
Nike- know if some cameras can proses less light? like a F5 on one camera would show the same amount of light as an F3.7 on another? (if you just think about light that is and forget about DOF and so on)
Well, I think the one thing is the sensor of the camera - some sensors produce more, some less noise when you're working with high iso - that depends on the sensor size, for instance - larger sensors that usually, but not always have larger pixels that can gather more photons at any light levels usually perform better in low light situations than small ones.
The other thing is a lens issue - fast lenses can be a lot of help when dealing with bad light situations - like a 50 mm f 1,8 or even f 1,4.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lens_speed
And then the way the lens is built does influence how much light can pass through it (reflections, stry light etc. - you can read more about it in the light transmission chapter of the article I'm linking to below). So try out different lenses and see what happens :)
If you're interested in all that technical stuff - the "transfer chain in digital photography", I always found that article quite interesting:
http://www.schneider-kreuznach.com/knowhow/opt_quali_e.htm
I really like #70 - nice portrait! - and I too like the feel of the last one a lot. Seems really cold :)
Thanks purplerose and Nike!
"Martin Buber places dialogue in a central position in his philosophy: he sees dialogue as an effective means of on-going communication rather than as a purposive attempt to reach some conclusion or to express some viewpoint(s)."
http://fc91.deviantart.com/fs40/i/2009/050/9/2/Photo__Dialogue_by_JOFX.jpg
rattus
02-19-2009, 05:40 PM
nice concert shots, and like someone said, your portraits has a very nice varm feeling, cool to see some shots of oslo too! the area around "akershus festning" has quite a few places for shooting.
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http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v2296/140/17/1281793880/n1281793880_306237_8642.jpg
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http://photos-a.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v2296/140/17/1281793880/n1281793880_306240_9388.jpg
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http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v2296/140/17/1281793880/n1281793880_306239_9144.jpg
DStraX
02-28-2009, 11:36 PM
nr 77 is realy nice. the dust from the anglegrinder looks awsome!
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http://photos-d.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-snc1/v2389/140/17/1281793880/n1281793880_334083_4233217.jpg
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http://photos-h.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-snc1/v2389/140/17/1281793880/n1281793880_334079_4156404.jpg
81
http://photos-g.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-snc1/v2389/140/17/1281793880/n1281793880_334078_8090210.jpg
DStraX
03-01-2009, 06:03 PM
awsome!!
looking though some old photos
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http://fc88.deviantart.com/fs24/i/2008/008/5/9/Photo__well_it_is_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc24.deviantart.com/fs24/i/2008/022/a/9/photo__Car_Eclipse_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc67.deviantart.com/fs25/i/2008/078/1/4/Photo__31_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc91.deviantart.com/fs25/i/2008/080/8/a/photo__33_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc41.deviantart.com/fs27/i/2008/080/6/d/photo__35_by_JOFX.jpg
Nice work in 76 and 77!
In 79 I really like the composition and mood, could be a tad bit sharper though, and you could also try to increase the contrast a bit.
Nice colors and composition in 86.
81 took me a while to catch the scene.
Keep 'em coming! :)
Nike- thank you, all noted down :P
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http://fc88.deviantart.com/fs44/i/2009/074/d/f/Photo__juvenolatry_by_JOFX.jpg
Self portraits
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http://fc38.deviantart.com/fs44/i/2009/079/1/e/Photo__Ota_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc37.deviantart.com/fs42/i/2009/079/a/3/Photo__Esta_by_JOFX.jpg
90
http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs43/i/2009/102/e/1/Schebastian_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc09.deviantart.com/fs45/i/2009/101/e/b/Photo__enzymez_zenzymez_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs44/i/2009/090/2/5/Photo__Abstract_Industrial_sce_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://photos-g.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v2679/140/17/1281793880/n1281793880_389478_5003613.jpg
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http://photos-a.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v2679/140/17/1281793880/n1281793880_389480_684251.jpg
Carmenator
04-22-2009, 12:03 AM
I like the self portraits a lot, there is a sort of mystery going on in them.
Carmenator- thanks :)
Some models im making. Ill try to get more cool photos of them.
http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs44/i/2009/113/3/a/Anima1_by_JOFX.jpg
some photos from today
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http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs022.snc1/4251_1167199741789_1281793880_456551_582370_n.jpg
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http://photos-c.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs022.snc1/4251_1167199901793_1281793880_456554_3459696_n.jpg
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http://photos-d.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs022.snc1/4251_1167199941794_1281793880_456555_3470133_n.jpg
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http://photos-e.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs022.snc1/4251_1167199981795_1281793880_456556_1985758_n.jpg
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http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs022.snc1/4251_1167200021796_1281793880_456557_2502206_n.jpg
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http://photos-g.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs022.snc1/4251_1167200061797_1281793880_456558_5841368_n.jpg
100!
http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs022.snc1/4251_1167200101798_1281793880_456559_8289697_n.jpg
101
http://photos-a.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs022.snc1/4251_1167200141799_1281793880_456560_2427541_n.jpg
Love the self portraits - really nice composition in 89! I like 90 a lot, too - could be a random boring portrait, but with this expression in the face it's a winner :)
The action shots are coming along nicely, too - I like 100 and 101 best - they are a little bit underexposed, and in 101 the sky is very grainy, which could easily be improved by ps.
Keep them coming! :)
Nike- thanks so much, im glad your checking my stuff out now and then :)
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http://photos-e.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs022.snc1/4251_1171735575182_1281793880_472164_932923_n.jpg
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http://photos-e.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs022.snc1/4251_1172670838563_1281793880_476188_3089012_n.jpg
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http://photos-c.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs022.snc1/4251_1172670758561_1281793880_476186_8052021_n.jpg
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http://photos-g.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs022.snc1/4251_1172670598557_1281793880_476182_4370363_n.jpg
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http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs022.snc1/4251_1172670558556_1281793880_476181_5843393_n.jpg
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http://photos-a.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs022.snc1/4251_1172670318550_1281793880_476176_1991286_n.jpg
EvrEst
06-03-2009, 04:17 PM
I took a chance to check out your whole thread. You have some really good work on here! I can see experience and good eye on most of your works and my only crit would be this.
You take so many pictures of people and this mysterious candid fog seems to be your style of choice. I think you are too good to keep going candid. Get them doing something you want and make a materpiece from it! Some of the skate shots where they got big air are amazing! #103 is really good too. Look where the light hits the side of the girl on the right. Almost perfect to see her figure and tone. If the other one was angled a bit as well then both would be bathed in that color and It would be really awesome!
Keep up the good work!
Thanks EvrEst. Im actually working on making my paintings more than just paintings to, trying to go deeper some how. maybe i should try to make themes for my photos, try to get some things that aren't totally random. I like just taking pictures of things i do and the people im with so there will still be lots of candid pictures i guess. Anyhow thanks for a useful comment; ill try to grow :)
my Oslo culture:
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http://photos-b.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs105.snc1/4592_1174166675958_1281793880_480121_4203055_n.jpg
109
http://photos-c.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs105.snc1/4592_1174166715959_1281793880_480122_7329184_n.jpg
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http://photos-d.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs105.snc1/4592_1174166755960_1281793880_480123_2278798_n.jpg
111
http://photos-e.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs105.snc1/4592_1174166795961_1281793880_480124_3990848_n.jpg
112
http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs085.snc1/4592_1174166835962_1281793880_480125_1951900_n.jpg
113
http://photos-g.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs085.snc1/4592_1174166875963_1281793880_480126_5648069_n.jpg
EvrEst
06-09-2009, 10:14 PM
that would be really cool to see, if you could set up a theme sometimes when you go out. I would never want you to stop shooting candid bc thats what you love. Just add to it. themes can be shapes, colors, emotions, even a random object that could create a story.
I really like 108/109/111 Nice composition on each and the effect turned our really well!
EvrEst- Ill try to think of themes next time i take the camera with me, Anyone have some ideas about themes (to get me started)
Some portraits from my birthdayparty; im now 20 years of age-
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http://photos-a.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs109.snc1/4922_1180128264994_1281793880_497816_72485_n.jpg
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http://photos-e.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs089.snc1/4922_1180128424998_1281793880_497820_2000874_n.jpg
116
http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs089.snc1/4922_1180128464999_1281793880_497821_5365781_n.jpg
EvrEst
06-15-2009, 09:50 PM
114 and 116 Amazing! Reallly like 116 that is a very well put together piece of art! Im impressed :)
Heres a theme. I want to see your take on "time"
Go for it
Ethan
Disruption
06-22-2009, 06:23 PM
wow....108-113 have an AWESOME style to them....i dig it!
Disruption- thanks
EvrEst- "time" was a hard one. I did try to make a theme this time though.
115
http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs47/i/2009/177/3/9/Photo_Fr3_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs48/i/2009/177/3/9/Photo_Fr2_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc00.deviantart.com/fs48/i/2009/177/f/5/Fr1_by_JOFX.jpg
And one random portrait:
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http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs46/i/2009/177/3/c/Photo_3_14_by_JOFX.jpg
EvrEst
07-01-2009, 02:19 AM
I like the effect of the fires heat and smoke. Really good! As always good portrait :) With the heat; some of the focal point is somewhat missing and it may be that your camera had trouble focusing through the effect maybe your too close or too far away. distance is all i can narrow it down to.
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http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs49/i/2009/202/b/6/yesterday_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs47/f/2009/202/a/a/PERSES_by_JOFX.jpg
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http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs47/i/2009/214/a/c/Photo__piaip_by_JOFX.jpg
EvrEst
08-04-2009, 07:05 AM
I love the Hard shadows in your last post! 116 is my favorite by far.
On 118, Its a great pose and the lighting does it justice, I see some brush work on the right edges and I think If you could tweak the BW color cast and use the brushes MORE; even on her face it would create a much more dramatic piece. Im thinking lights lighter and darks a bit darker. That way the brush strokes you use would be more defined and add an aged appearance with the scratch work that would create an emotion as if the piece was put through trials or disasters and still survived.
:)
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