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Jofx
03-20-2008, 01:39 PM
I just got a camera this year (D70s)

so im still in basic learning modus. any critique you give would be verry nice (:
if anyone desides to use any of these as reffs it would be cool if you tell me, fun to see stuff getting used.

Contact me on this CA, www.Jofx.deviantart.com or josteinfox@gmail.com

1
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/13209_1199235920.jpg
2
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/15727_1199719647.jpg
3
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/43707_1199376380.jpg

4
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/64450_1199236818.jpg

5
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/assasasah1.jpg
6
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/f6.jpg
7
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/farrokh_to_the_nill_by_JOFX.jpg
8
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/mayt.jpg
9
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/Seb.jpg
10
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h225/Jofx/sri.jpg
Asadex
03-20-2008, 03:57 PM
i'm in love for n.4
purplerose
03-20-2008, 06:57 PM
Pretty nice compositions, especially in #10.

Keep working on your contrast so the people can "pop" more.
Jofx
03-21-2008, 08:04 PM
Pretty nice compositions, especially in #10.
Keep working on your contrast so the people can "pop" more.
Colour contrasts(cold warm, dark light) or do you mean like sharpness/shape contrasts?
or maybe just separating them from the background all together?
purplerose
03-22-2008, 08:20 PM
Colour contrasts(cold warm, dark light) or do you mean like sharpness/shape contrasts?
or maybe just separating them from the background all together?

Your color contrast is alright. I'm speaking more in terms of tonal values. You should have a good range of dark shadows to highlights, right now some of them look a bit "flat" to me.
Jofx
03-23-2008, 12:15 AM
Your color contrast is alright. I'm speaking more in terms of tonal values. You should have a good range of dark shadows to highlights, right now some of them look a bit "flat" to me.


noted down. i will try to find ways to do that in future! really helps when people point spesific things out like that, opens my eyes more.
i thank you for your help (: