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Tad
03-01-2008, 04:31 AM
Well I moved to Virginia recently and have been playing around with this Nikon F1 I also got recently.

Got some snaps on the way to work..
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2068/2267219121_136257e924_o.jpg






http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2268/2268006646_35ee4e2271_o.jpg






http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2303/2268006636_93fccb6851_o.jpg

Gentile
03-01-2008, 06:58 AM
I really like the first one but I think there might be just a bit too much sky at the top.

Morbid
03-01-2008, 01:24 PM
I like the first and the third one!

Tad
03-01-2008, 08:44 PM
I really like the first one but I think there might be just a bit too much sky at the top.

Yeah, it looks ok on its own, but now that I see it here in a thread,
I agree with you. The pic is like all sky!

purplerose
03-02-2008, 08:23 AM
I really like the first one too. Just a simple crop of a 1/3 of the sky and it would be better like Gentile said. :) Wouldn't hurt to crop off the rest of the cut off cow on the left side as well.

I like the one with the lonely cow as well. Would be beneficial to play around with the cropping more though.

Tad
03-03-2008, 03:48 AM
thanks!
wow no one likes my trailer, that was my fav, haha.

yeah i didn't work these over very much in ps.
I think i'll give the 1st one another once over and repost.

eazym
03-03-2008, 07:52 AM
the first one is really nice. and the negative space isn't too bad, if this was going in a magazine or something, the editors would love to put text in that space. The cow at the edge is a little strange though. If you're not against cropping, that might be a good idea, or cloning it out, whatever works. But cropping's probably easier

Tad
03-06-2008, 01:31 AM
Ok so I took your advice into account and made some changes to the first one.

I agree, much better with that side cow removed!
Gotta wonder why I thought that was acceptable. Well at least I'm learning! :)

Did some other slight tweaks too.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3182/2313749884_8e33be50e8_o.jpg

daedicurus
03-06-2008, 04:28 AM
this is a nice edit, i really like the way the tree line draws you in from the right and then fades out so you focus on the cows.

alicat08
03-08-2008, 12:04 AM
love the last one with the cows. you should try it out in B&W...

DIGme
03-30-2008, 08:51 PM
It's just a personal point of view but, i think it's a little too luminous, so there is a lack of surrounding. The first one in B&W, maybe ?

But un great potential :)

(sorry for my english...)