Dead Animals are Still Life 8)

[Ethyr D'vant]

http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/229/1/4/waiting_for_dad_by_Xvant.jpg

http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs45/i/2009/211/9/d/Waiting_for_Mom_by_Xvant.jpg

http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs49/i/2009/211/1/0/Waiting_for_Sis_by_Xvant.jpg

that's for the moment, all digital and with shity pocket cameras.

[purplerose]

The first two are really intense!

The green works, although I think the fly could be a bit sharper and less green.

I like the heavy shadows in the second one. The bright top right corner is a bit distracting though. You could crop it out from the top at the expense of the whiskers.

The third doesn't have much impact as the first two for me. The legs do create a story of: "Did this person kill the cat?" However, I like the loneliness and despair present in the first two.

Keep posting and shooting!

[Hookswords]

I agree with Purplerose's comments. While the white in the upper right corner of the 2nd one provides a compositional exit point it is too intense and distracts from the picture as a whole.

[Ethyr D'vant]

thanks for the comments, it's seem that my inexperience its great in composition terms. well, in any case, the first pic isn't apreciable in a more profesional case, the camera was a pocket digital so old i can't remember (was like 5 years ago) emmm, and bout the cat, i think that was came up in my mind in that moment was the expresion over the other things, because in a first look, it doesn't looks dead, but then you realize that and the whole picture changes. like rose said, the legs also play a relevant role in that change.

ill try your crop advice, ill show ya later ;3