Logo Design

[Frutsel]

I tried to design 2 kind of logo's, wich i want to use as an watermark in my photo's

Here are the 2 example's. The first one is verry simple, but i like it because of that. The 2nd one i like most.

The problem is, i want to know your oppinion. Points to improve etc etc..

So please tell me wich one should i use or try to improve.

A)

http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr304/fritsvrielink-photography/logo%20design/_MG_8560_58_59-2border_logo2.jpg

B)

http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr304/fritsvrielink-photography/logo%20design/_MG_8560_58_59-2_border_logo1.jpg

[Valadilene]

I like the second one much MUCH better. Not only is it less intrusive, if you choose to use it on a business card or a website it transfers over alot easier. the only thing I would suggest trying would be to make your last name run left to right, not right to left along the bottom of the circle... people can't read it upside down and right to left, they'll eeither not read it at all, or have to stare at it for a few seconds before their brain can process it.. both of which are bad when it comes to your name.. especially your last name. You want that name instantly recognizable and memorable to any prospective client or contact

And it looks liek the letter spacing on your last name may be a little uneven, its hard to tell when its backwards though.. but the E and L look a bit too close together compared to the rest of the letters.. could also be a product of the curve though.


-Heather

[Nike]

I like the second one much better, too... Personally, I'd keep everything as simple as possible (the fonts, too) - that way not only the text is better to read but it's also easier to combine it with various different photos and different moods.