Undecided

[Gentile]

So if I don't know if I like a picture or not I'll put it here, and hopefully I can get some feedback :]
1
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg119/XgentileX/PhotographyMob/picture014.jpg
2
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg119/XgentileX/PhotographyMob/picture006.jpg
3
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg119/XgentileX/PhotographyMob/picture003.jpg
4
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg119/XgentileX/PhotographyMob/picture015.jpg

[cleonor]

My favourite is the top one. The lone girl pulls me into the shot, and then the reflections in the glass make me linger and take a closer look. There are a lot of levels, especially for people who don't know exactly where you are.

Are you from japan or somewhere? I'm not quite sure...

If you're not, sorry for confusing you!!

[Gentile]

Thanks for the feedback!
Ya I live in Japan :]

[purplerose]

I like the first one too. :) Could have a slight boost in contrast though.

Keep shooting and working! :)

[Gentile]

Thank you.
I usually mess around with contrast and such but none of these have been edited.

[Morbid]

I like the first one too, it's nice.

[MLlanes]

i like the first one. play with the levels a bit and contrast and it will be good.

it doesnt really jump out right now.

[Gentile]

5
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg119/XgentileX/PhotographyMob/picture162.jpg

[daedicurus]

i'd also like to add my support for the first shot here, it has a lot of emotion but i think the thing that's throwing it out is that it's not level. the single girl gives a feeling of loneliness but i think the way the shot is angled so that everything is sliding up to her is giving her too much strength.

[Gentile]

6
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg119/XgentileX/PhotographyMob/landscape.jpg
7
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg119/XgentileX/PhotographyMob/landscape2.jpg

[Nike]

I really like the first batch (and #1 - what everybody else said - great expression).
In #5 the contrast and saturation seem to be a bit too much hyped up for me - I like the expression of the face, though.

The last ones are quite overexposed - is that on purpose?

[Gentile]

8
http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs27/i/2008/079/5/7/Bright_by_xgentilex.jpg

[Ment]

Nr 1-4 could all use some more contrast and nr. 3 isn't sharp.
I like nr 1 and nr. 4, it's a nice crop and I like hello Kitty ;)

I don't like the colors in the photo and you can see an irritating rim around the girl.
I like the girl and her expression though.

Nr 6-7 are overexposed and look a little desaturated. I would use more lively colors in 6, it adds more to the photo.

Nr 8 is a nice abstract composition, maybe a tighter crop?

[purplerose]

WOAH! #8 is intense. I like it. :) Should crop off that slightly black curving line at the bottom and it would be perfect.

[Gentile]

So I really like this one but I feel like I can make it better....not sure how though. Any suggestions?
9
http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg119/XgentileX/see.jpg

[ukanfoff]

maybe needs a secondary point of interest.
seeing that it says see.
everythinng around the cup is pretty ordinary.

[ukanfoff]

wait... easter eggs?
i think put more easter eggs stuff more visible in the negative space.