I like it a lot.
The clouds and the cliff face are reading as approximately the same material. Color could clear that up pretty quickly.
I love the shading you did on this, the picture itself is very compelling.
I think the problem with pen&ink is that there is no Ctrl+z command.
writers and artists have a lot in common -- we both draw from life, we both paint pictures, and we'll both spend to many sleepless nights on our work.
My (new) sketchbook: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=100982
My (old) Sketchbook:http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=88773
Nice!I would love to see it in color.