why is his leg coming out of a magic portal in the paper?? Lose the box around him, its really distracting. Right now the character is extremely flat, lacks any definition, and needs to be developed. Remember it is made up of mass, not card board cut-outs. I am sorry to say, but it needs alot of work, you need to consider form and shape before you start throwing lines down on the paper. Look at objects, and their make up. cubes, spheres, cylinders etc. apply that too your drawings.
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