playing with a bit of colour...
Nice image overall, but becomes a bit minimalistic when you take away all of the objects, textures, and even the little comic creatures. This image is a bit hacknied(sp) and seems sort of like anime gothic, if there is such a thing. Perhaps you could come up with a little more chiaroscuro. Nice to see you painting!
Hey Factor whats up, doesn't seem like your story is getting going fast enough. The girl looks like she is going to bed or sich or something. Lot of times with things like this you just have to draw from personal experience; from things you like or like to do and then center the story around that activity. Try to visualize yourself or your character doing that activity. Even something as simple as making a comic book can be pretty hilarious if you thing about it!
Gosh I was really expecting to see some series talk between these two lovers, folk, or whomever.
This one is for a contest on Harvey James' blog. http://harveyjames.livejournal.com/137261.html
You have to make a comic using at least two premade characters on his blog. All the characters are pretty quirky looking, so I figured I'd contrast that by doing a casual one pager. I think I enjoy pencils over ink for finished pages.
Edit: miss spelled a word. fixed.
Last edited by FactorZero; September 19th, 2009 at 03:56 PM.