this one was about 2 hours or so....other than color issues really didnt change much from the intitial sketch .... sometimes i wonder if that is good or bad.
nice sense of depth and ambiance but I really have to say that this does not look finished at all. It could use a lot of cleaning up, especially in you lines and value seperations. I also thik it might help a little to some reflections of that wall in the water to make it a little more noticible. Hope that helps.
Good work so far. Keep pushing.
thanks thats what i need
here is some more work done. I am honestly trying to avoid the 'line work ' look of the piece however.
so what do you think so far?
I also think that the edge of the water nearest to us still looks pasted into the scene. I think it's because there is too much difference in contrast between the near water and the foreground. I can definitely get a sense of what you're going for here though. Nice.