Here is a project I am working on for someone. It is going to be a street brawl scene. I am going to set it in front of a biker bar. You won't see too much of the bar, maybe see a bike and an onlooker or two.
I wanted to have you guys take a look so far and let me know what I should work on before I start inking. I made a lot of mistakes on the Mighty Max post that I don't want to repeat.
Let me hear the crits. Don't be shy. I know I am not the best illustrator, but I think this is a great place to improve.