The Light should be straight out of the ... hilt? you cant bend light.
Nice line work, but it's kinda hard to tell what's going on(for me at least) considering his pose, the direction of his eyes, and the fact that the figure in the foreground is facing away from him.
Last edited by Cyrus; April 25th, 2005 at 06:51 PM.
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I don't know if you were going for this but I see a mix of Luke and Anakin in the face. Good job if that was your plan.
There is something just a little off with the black and white areas, no focal point maybe?
The first thing that I noticed is that his feet don't seem to be solidly planted on the ground.
Nice clean style though!
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go away fan boy! just kidding. its very influenced by clone wars.