For art class, study of perspective, and I chose mecha...dang, that's about all I post on here, isn't it...
For a study on perspective, I'm seeing very little in this. I have a hard time reading where the horizion line is, if it's even there at all, start with that, show us the ground plane. By cutting off the feet, I can't tell where this guys are standing in the ground plane, a good way to go would be to pull back and have them full body.
Or draw a bottom view looking up at one of the Transformers.
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