Level 16 Gladiator: Spartacus' Retiarii
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The Bone Doctor Diagnosis :::
Talent wellness chart ::: very dynamic line work ::: I like the form crossing volume hunting approach ::: look at Daumier a little ::: you seem to have a good feel for the form ::: this is the key to ALL ::: all the technique in the world will not help you if you don't have the feel. ::: you are well on your way ::: you should work on anatomy and try to understand the function of the structure which dictates the form ::: the two most important things to remember are (1) motion creates emotion (2) function creates form
those 2 elements are the cake everything else is just icing>
You're doing well. A common mistake you seem to be making (I do this all the time) is that your heads are too long. The bridge of the nose should be smaller, and the cheek bones higher. Your style is interesting. I don't know if you intend everything to look as sketchy as it does, or if it's just habit. If so, then I would suggest perhaps working with pen a bit, and trying to make every line count. It's hard to crit ya, because it doesn't look like there's really anything fundamental you don't already know. Just keep going. It's all about the process, not the product.