September 2nd, 2004, 03:04 PM
this is my first posting here.
My Hobby is to draw comics, so I think it´s only right to introduce myself
with a comic I lately made:
C&C are welcome :-)
September 2nd, 2004, 03:09 PM
ok, may I jsut say that ur drawing style absolutely rocks!
there might be some flaws, but nothing big and nothing worth talkink about
looks like a real professional comic, jsut like the ones in the library
September 2nd, 2004, 04:22 PM
Hmmm...A comic about a giant penis preying on little boys....
I'm glad that you're getting it out of your system.
I think the marketability of this one will prove difficult, but maybe that's not a concern right now.
There's a good narrative flow to the comic, the story is coherent and there's a good cliffhanger sort of ending there. So you have a good grasp on how to put together a comic.
Use lighter lines for background, heavier in the foreground. Decide to do black & white line art or greyscale. Right now it's kind of a murky combination of both. I'd go black & white if I were you. Check out "dynamic light and shadow" by Burne Hogarth.
Anatomy needs a lot of study. Spelling too.
Keep it up you're well on the way.
September 3rd, 2004, 04:44 AM
Hi, thanks to you.
This encourages me to do part two soon.
It´s true that I have to improve my drawing skills a lot, especially
when it comes to anatomy and perspektive, but I work on it :-)
Just added the Hogarth-Book to my list, thx.
I think i will change the style a little bit for episode two and do more
with the pc (pen arrived today).
For the spelling: I´m happy to make myself at least understandable,
caus english isn´t my first language. :-) But I´ll do more spellchecks