Hmmm...A comic about a giant penis preying on little boys....
I'm glad that you're getting it out of your system.
I think the marketability of this one will prove difficult, but maybe that's not a concern right now.
There's a good narrative flow to the comic, the story is coherent and there's a good cliffhanger sort of ending there. So you have a good grasp on how to put together a comic.
Use lighter lines for background, heavier in the foreground. Decide to do black & white line art or greyscale. Right now it's kind of a murky combination of both. I'd go black & white if I were you. Check out "dynamic light and shadow" by Burne Hogarth.
Anatomy needs a lot of study. Spelling too.
Keep it up you're well on the way.
Hi, thanks to you.
This encourages me to do part two soon.
Itīs true that I have to improve my drawing skills a lot, especially
when it comes to anatomy and perspektive, but I work on it :-)
Just added the Hogarth-Book to my list, thx.
I think i will change the style a little bit for episode two and do more
with the pc (pen arrived today).
For the spelling: Iīm happy to make myself at least understandable,
caus english isnīt my first language. :-) But Iīll do more spellchecks