this is a very nice improvement from the last one, the contrast is alot better, the light source is better defined this time and ur strokes are alot nicer and cleaner, im dam proud of ya for workin on that, most the time u give someone a crit, they dont do anything but i can def. see u were workin hard on it, just keep the same up for doing the other stuff like the hair, seems like u got kinda lazy with the hair but for hair, it can simply be defined by the right highlights, but good work on this one, now i can tell ur tired from the bags under ur eyes so go get some sleep hehe.
Nathan Campbells 3 steps to drawing like a pro, 1. Sketch 2. shade. 3. highlights and ur done