I'm sorry, the only critic I can give you now is I found Spidey butt really big... actually it remind me of a female one... I have an issue with left deadpool leg at the knee part, I do not understand very well how the line interpret the link at the bottom.
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The anatomy's really awkward right now, stiff and in the case of the arms, the wrong size altogether. Any chance of seeing what went on before the inking?
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Rule #1 of depicting soldiers: KEEP THE DAMN FINGER OFF THE DAMN TRIGGER.
About anatomy, the same as the others... about the ink work, you got a good work, but you can improve it a lot... try the techniques of Moebius and/or Frank Miller