These are some sketches I have done recently. As well as my first 3d project I did way back when I was first at the Art Institute International Minnesota
Critique are wanted and welcome of course!
Painting accomplished in one day. My boyfriend's character from wow. Flickdabean
Love your work!
A small something that bothered me - the statue lady's hand palm... Something is just wrong with the shading and it messes up the values - it seems the back of the hand and just looks weird.
I really like the soft works on the toned paper. But perhaps you should try using a bit harder lines here and there to show rhythm, and bring more tension and interest to the work.
The color piece has a lot of room for improvement. The colors are plainly not interesting - every color stands on it's own and just get a bit of black or white in the shadows and lights. Colors interact, they get reflexed, the get warmer or cooler not just darker or brighter. Try using some complementary colors in the shadows and you'll feel the difference right away. The lines - what purpose do they serve in this piece? If they are only a sketch - get rid of them, if you wish to have a line-work then treat it properly - pay attention to the width of your line, don't leave it messy as it is - now the lines just give it a childish feeling, not suiting you're much more mature graphic works.
Keep up the work! =]
These are just a quick design for a deer hunting shirt - I imagine it having a little text and also coloring in the deer head/antlers. Quite excited about it. Let me know what you think?!
Last edited by NovemberForest; December 14th, 2012 at 04:39 PM.