Thank you for checking out my sketchbook, prsnsweeney!
P Sage: Yeah, you're definitely right. I'm sketching it out again just to see if I can get it right this time. I think what turned me off of doing perspective on the original drawing was that I had watched Marshall Vandruffs Anatomy series and someone asked him about perspective lines. I'm not sure if it was the simple kind that you did, or the more complex grids, but he said something about it being over kill.
Looking back now, it may have just been the complex grid because Loomis does have this in his book.
Thanks again, man.