Really cool stuff mate !!!! Great studies, and lovely depth of field in this last one. Also very good enviro on that robot, however if i was to suggest something, maybe because its a cloudy condition [right?] you could try to introduce some more ambient occlusion and make your edges a little more fuzzy, just to portray the diffuse light some more. But thats just an opinion. Keep up the great work!!!!
Damn man good job on the robot and that environment study looks good, i couldn't tell if it was a picture or painting haha.
hey there! Great effort displayed here! Now with that concept piece, it looks very flat. The use of lighting needs to be improved. in some places there seems to be a shadow pattern but for the most part its very dodgy. Also, there's no reflected light/fill light coming from below. I think you'd benefit greatly from doing a 100+ hour still life study with different materials and forms. I think starting there would help you out a great deal. Try and see how soft edges and hard edges compliment each other and then implement that into your drawings/paintings. Remember, it is our job as visual communicators to tell a story. That story should focus on the most interesting things/important things. Again, good effort!
Sketchbook > http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...13#post3372113
kingkostas, thank you man! I really appreciate the input! I´ll definitely try to work on my edge quality.
hahah, thanks Yemi!
Jmob, thank you. i appreciate the crits! I will need to do more painting and drawing from life. Moar studies!
Had soo much fun with these! This is my favorite thing to do ever i think.
Which one do you prefer?
all these look lovely mate. Pick what you love, for me 2 has nice area to paint up there and maybe also 6, but they are all cool actually and thats good
Awesome sketchbook I like your character designs and your colors look great. You also did a really good job on that Craig Mullins study : P I don't have anything to crit now, but I'll be back later. Keep it up!
http://conceptart.org/forums/showthr...oy-called-Papu <-- Sketchbook :=)
http://jpapu.deviantart.com/ <------ DEVIANTART
Ser mycket studier och sådant på sistone. Visst det är bra men hadde velat se något du gjort för dig själv och lagt ner lite tid på.
See the TURTLE of enormous girth!
On his shell he holds the earth.
His thought is slow but always kind;
He holds us all within his mind.
damn dude, that last still life turned out great! also really digg the creature concepts,very cool!
Flask your stuffs are getting better by the minute I really like those purple monster things, and your silhouettes are strong; the one thing I'd recommend is being careful with the values of figuers against backgrounds, like the old men in the last post: the background should be lighter, or the figures darker, because as it is, they are too similar. A very quick example. Keep it up!
Last edited by NeonPoweredFirefly; May 23rd, 2013 at 04:28 PM.
love those mech sketches, there so full of character, brainstorming is the most fun
Whoa, internet argument! Your work is leveling up like crazy bro. Once you've got the shape, the rendering is easy and good... like that mech in #312. Only thing I can critique a little is the rendering on the old man's face in 313 is a little extreme (contrast wise).
Very nice, though. You've been working hard!
been a while since last post man, hope all is well!
I just saw your update on DA... as always: good job, your studies are awesome!
You were already great at the start but now you're awesome man! The amount of quality studies and improvement is really inspiring. I'll definitely follow this SB!
Keep it up!
Wow nice speedies man, make mine look like complete crap! Haha got nothing more to say other than: keep kicking it!
Du har inte några tips/kritik på mina speeds? Skulle vara grymt kul att höra från någon som har kommit längre än en själv. Dina har en ren, tydlig och självsäker look, väldigt "cleana" med klart definierade objekt om du hajjar. Använder du 100% opacity?
Keep it up!
Tack för din kommentar i min sketchbuuk .
Jag är jäkligt svag för Star wars asså haha... Din stormsamurai . Jäklar vad grym du blivit alltså! Väldigt inspirerande! Kommer verkligen att titta in igen .
Inga crits, du är 1000 gånger bättre än mig haha!
"A man chooses. A slave obeys."