Yeah man, crit away, any advice is better than no advice.
Yeah fluid poses aren't easy, its why i'm starting to apply it now. Going from static to fluid and organic is a long jump but one everyone has to take at some point or another.
Tbh i don't lose heart over not having the skill. That comes with mileage and drawing consistently. The problem I have is with imagination, I guess I need to be skilled first before doing imaginative stuff- still theres alot I want to draw but can't really do because its too complex to tackle for now. All in good time. I've only been drawing a year so hopefully this 2nd year will see an even bigger jump.
The gesture were about 60-90seconds each. I generally do two minute gestures now because it gives time to think of the basic tone and embellish a few details here and there
So, the past two days have been repeated attempts to understand atmospheric perspective, I don't have anything to show since alot of it frustrated me that they're barely even readable. Well keep on trying I guess. >.<
Some gestures, and a few heads and a few poses.