PHATandy - thanks a lot man - really appreciate the crit! So essentially you are saying that next time I work on it I should try and accentuate those overlaps to give more depth to it? I'll work on that today a little more, to try and establish those overlaps.
You say its really obvious but to me its really not - I've never tried a landscape before (or really any painting other than the portrait posted in this SB) so it really helps me identify what I should be looking for straight away
Btw no worries about the new page - totally worth it!
Here are todays anatomy studies - the figures are drawn from imagination as are a couple of the feet but the rest is from Bridgman's Life Drawing.