but where? and what is wrong with his eyes? what else is wrong for that matter?
looks like Bruce, even from the thumbnail!
your proportions seem ok to me, but your details are a bit strange:
The eyelashes, the eyebrows and the lipdetails make him look more feminine than he is.
Just drop the eyelashes, make the eyebrows a bit fuzzier and lighter and add bags under his eyes and should get more likeness
I just took a break to post this.
But sometimes I also draw stuff
Bloody hell that has a lot of contrast!
Is there a reason for you to work in such extreme gamuts so early? Pure Black and Pure White should be avoided until the end of a piece, and even then only on particular areas. BUT if this painting is for a specific style, then maybe the proportions and distribution of value just needs readjusting.
As for the eyes (sorry for the shitty edit, i used my trackpad):
(I think I went a little far with the eye, but you get the drift.)