February 11th, 2009, 05:58 PM
Hi I'm new here, although I have known about the site for a while. I have just decided to take the step and put my work up. I really feel as though it's time to start getting some really good constructive critique on my work. I'd really appreciate critique and ideas for improving my proportions and anatomy, perspective, rendering (line work and photoshop painting), how I can make my characters appear more natural and how to make fabric fall naturally.
Thanks so much in advance, I really appreciate your thoughts
So here we go: Finished piece~ Bill and Bullseye from Oliver Twist
Last edited by rose-colligan; February 11th, 2009 at 08:36 PM.
February 11th, 2009, 06:13 PM
Looks great! My only criticism is that the feet look a bit cartoonish compared to the rest of the character. Pretty minor, really.
February 11th, 2009, 06:16 PM
thanks for your comment! yes they probably do...I wanted to give the character a bit of exaggeration but perhaps I needed to add it to other areas also.
February 11th, 2009, 09:36 PM
It is good to pick a level of exaggeration and stick to it throughout the picture. For instance, in this, Bill is kind of cartoony, while Bullseye is very realistic. Either one is okay, but they look kind of strange together in the same picture.
February 11th, 2009, 09:53 PM
i think the large feet make the character look nice. maybe big hands to compliment them tho
February 11th, 2009, 09:58 PM
yes i agree with you both there...I need to figure out where I want to go with my style..I like realistic looking comics/cartoons so that is where Im trying to head. When I re-evaluate this charac at some point I will re-work the dog and give it more character. Yeah and bigger hands!