Okay man.. where to begin!..
On the sketchpages.. first, thank you for putting them up!
I love to see how people study and how they study certain things.
I find it very interesting!
And these sketchpages are great. though id love to see more volume on a page..
Try to fill it up.. like rly rly fill it up.. The one with the stick/loomis figures. just fill up the damn page, make them interect witch eachother take them from the top or undernearth.. just rly try to have fun with them
The pose of the jumping guy is rly cool too.. if its from mind i think its brilliant
I think the critique i would give on it is already written down beside it. so im gonna shut up on it
Also those heads with the 3 angles look rly great to
Its a little short head but those exist so i dont rly mind it, still think it looks good
And the illustration, damn man its turning out rly damn funny..
The guy rly looks like a loser and the big guy rly looks mean..
Im not sure what you want to do with the ligtning but if i see the hightligh on the neck of the big guy.. then id think you could make the shadows alot stronger.. especially on the pants of the 2..
Im looking forward how this illu will turn out.
Keep working hard my friend, and about those assignments between us.. that would be fudging great