EDIT AGAIN: another rework down below. the original can be viewed right here
I did this just under a year ago as part of my senior thesis, but i got the urge to go back and work back into it for consideration in Spectrum, so ithout further ado, here it be.
I also included the old piece I did during my thesis, the difference is enough to make me glad I went back and revised it. Thanks to everyone who chimed in over in the Critique forum!