August 3rd, 2002, 11:02 PM
i did this lastnight in painter, and added some touches to it today,
August 4th, 2002, 02:33 AM
Nice... cool shapes and interesting mechanics. I like the colour too, the separation between the panels and the structure really works.
Clean up your edges, they are blurry and are a bit detremental to the overall pic. Maybe a background would be nice, as everyone always says... :p
Hope that helps.
August 4th, 2002, 03:19 AM
what the above said + the shoulderpads looks great.
August 5th, 2002, 07:53 PM
Ian, thanks you are correct! i tightend it alitte more, mabye i'll upload it alittle later.
August 5th, 2002, 08:58 PM
Yea.. tightening it up will pull it away from the background.. I would also suggest changing the background color from white to something darker.. As white the contrast is so strong that you loose some of the features..
Looks great otherwise!