what i'm working on at the moment
Shot at 2007-12-02
Overall I really like it, but there is one area that needs a bit of work. I've attached a cropped view of the problem area.
1. The guy's hand on her back. It took me a few minutes to recognize it as a hand, and not a backpack or jacket or something. This will probably be helped a bit with color
2. It looks like the girl has 3 arms coming from one socket?
Also the hand reaching overhead needs some work, the middle fingers looks broken, and why the pointy fingernail on only the thumb?
Right now it does look like the arms go to one spot. If it were more obvious that they were attached separately, like if we could see the shoulder joints, it would help. Also, the viewer has no way of knowing that she has another three arms on her other side, since there is no indication of them, so I only assumed that there was some error in drawing. Why does she have six arms anyways?
its based off my characters