I think her hand might be a little too big, or at least at the wrist.
But good coloring. The drawing is sweet also.
in the portrait part her eyes appear crooked
theyre too close together, her left eye should be further to the left.
Great line work, she looks good. One problem: her lower lip (the one she's biting) looks really wrong, as if she's pulling some loose fold of skin into her mouth instead of her actual lip.
I think she has severe back problems, the girl left in sketch is not the girl right in the sketch, something's with her hands and she looks like a guy.
For the rest: quite nice lines going there.
Please post these kind of works in the WIP section though. This is the section for finished works only.
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