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My name is Tim, 21 years young. Im taking a year to work on my portefolio and go cool places! Always trying to push my skills

Best work should be on the last page

Also if you take the time to comment on my sketchbook I will do my best to return the favor, after all thats how this community works
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Old October 29th, 2008, 02:41 AM
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Finaly an uppdate^^
this guy http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho....php?t=110284& inspired me to start hanging at CA again

more comming later today stay tuned
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hey man, cool start. i would love to ride that last bike from your first post . your pencils are nice too. i dunno anything to crit on the vehicles since i'm more from the character/creature fraction. lets see more
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Old October 31st, 2008, 11:54 AM
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A quicky I did last night, think ill do more of thise
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Old November 3rd, 2008, 09:45 AM
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Those traditional paintings looks very nice, interesting style! Nice figure poses, got to do some by myself, but just cant force myself to do so, damn...
Anyways good stuff man, keep it up!
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lol love the dead set picture the bottom one really does look like patrick and you have drawn some really nice poses keep posing
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GetiX: Thanks. cool that you saw it was from dead set

Big update, some old and some new the first poses are from today, i did 4 pages like this... 10, 15, 30, and 45 sec poses. one A4 for each but i wont bore you with all of them

Anyways hope you like!

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Wow! Bra greier her! Jeg liker at du kjører på med litt Posemaniacs, ofte lettere om du bruker en stor kritpensel eller noe, det gjør det hele mer dynamisk, men de er godt gjennomførte

Når det kommer til malegreiene er det tydelig potensiale, spessielt I de litt forenkla greiene, der tenkinga virker mer tegnerisk enn malerisk. Jeg vil anbefale å gjøre en masse fargestudier, ettersome det hjalp meg masse med å klare å tenke mer malerisk mye raskere Uansett så er det flotte greier, og det er bra at du har lagt deg til daglige oppdateringer. Fortsett med det!

Alt i alt er det viktige å aldri være fornøyd, og alltid streve for å bli bedre!

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Now for some gun concepts think I'll do more stuff like that.
Also some sketches from my little black book

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Mischeviouslittleelf: skal prøve sånn brush neste gang jeg er på posemaniacs. Skal prøve meg på flere fargestudier, ganske raske med stor brush. virker som en god måte og tenke mer malerisk på

takk for tips og sånn skal fortsette med dagelige updates
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Ive done a few color sketches today. but remember thise are just color experiments.

the fish is not from ref

edit: added some gun concepts.
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Today we where supose to make ittens colorwheel, I finished quicly and started on my private projects Time well spent i think.

and some train sketches. id like some comments on them.

Ill uploade some more stuff later today. check back later

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Great stuff. Check out this site and the mag if you can get it. It will really help with the digital painting, it helped me. Keep it up

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Some templars
i am actualy trying to record thise things. its a prety good way to learn by watching yourself draw. also timelapses makes anything look awsome^^

all of this is from my mind (obviously)

give me some harsh critisism people, think im getting to full of myself..

btw if you havent alredy done so, watch the movie named Arn - Tempelriddaren
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0837106/ it was awsome!
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D@niel: Thanks for the comment love your stuff!

Hi!
I havent had much time to post things up lately, but i will make a huge post some time soon.
Did some poses today on posemaniacs but i wont bore you with those now.

For now heres a little guy im working on, BEAR in mind this is a wip
I also felt like adding this orange chick to, just for funzis, you know^^ haha
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an update on my templar what do you think?
ill try to add more collors later, just have to figure out how....
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Your sketchbook is looking great. The vechicle sketches is really interesting, I would like to see a fully rendered version of one of them sometime.

On your last picture the characters head seems to be a bit too thin, but apart from that it's looking great. Keep up the good work!
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Meilin thanks think your right about the head on the templar, ill see to that it gets fixed.

I know thers been a lot of caracters lately, and i know they look booring but thats kinda what im working on, Id love some advice on how to bether them!

heres a jungle guy, and i think his shy...
please let me know what can be improved on him.

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why the hell do all the pics I upload here get less saturated!?!? Its pretty anoying..
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i said there would be a big uppdate. and there was
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Hey man, these later ones are getting better and better! Keep up the good work, I think I can answer the saturation question thing for ya. They do not actually get less saturated, but when you work in PS you might have the fullscreen on, and the contrast of the black against the image makes the rest of the colours pop more. Even so I had that same problem meself.

So for a few pointers. You should really do some hard core skeletal studies, just to really get to the basics, try also to be more deliberate with your strokes, so that every one has a intentfull direction and emphasis

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